Thoughts on Return of Old Dreams

A collaboration between me and evilblackcat22 on DeviantArt.

Start of ch1 script:

Return of Old Dreams
Chapter 1, page 1

Panel 1
Setting: Outside a mom-and-pop store. The entire panel is a large panel taking up half the page and setting the scene. Two boys, one about 20 and the other about 18 are walking down the street by the store. One is DRAKE SAMERAZ, the other is WES XARIENT. WES looks disoriented while DRAKE looks at ease and without a care in the world.

Panel 2
Setting: This panel takes up 1/4 of the page. Over the shoulder shot of DRAKE. He is looking at WES who looks somewhat confused.
DRAKE Speech Bubble: So, what do you think?
WES Speech Bubble: Uh--I don't know... I'm a bit--This is just so weird!

Panel 3
Setting: This panel takes up 1/2 of the last quarter of the page. It is longer horizontally than vertically. It is a long shot of DRAKE and WES on the sidewalk about to cross the street.
DRAKE Speech Bubble: You think this place is weird? Look at yourself!
WES Speech Bubble: ...? What do you mean, "look at yourself"?

Panel 4:
Setting: This panel takes up the last part of the page. It is also longer horizontally. It is a close up on DRAKE's eyes.
DRAKE Speech Bubble: You don't notice?

More pages later.